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Author Topic: Brain Shop Brains! Yummy Brains......  (Read 3744 times)
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zachattack
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« on: August 09, 2005, 12:33:12 AM »

http://dragonprime.net/users/zachattack/brainshop.txt    "name"=>"Zust's Brain Shop",
    "version"=>"2.0",
    "author"=>"Zacharei<br>Original Code by: Chris Vorndran", "description"=>"Allows a user to purchase a brain, that will boon the player randomly.",

 All thanks given to sichae for the code and the help and the delicious brains my members can now crunch on.
« Last Edit: August 09, 2005, 12:35:24 AM by zachattack » Logged
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« Reply #1 on: August 09, 2005, 12:34:23 AM »

Your link is not functional.

http://dragonprime.net/users/zachattack/brainshop.txt
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« Reply #2 on: August 09, 2005, 12:41:13 AM »

Ok thanks sichae Grin I hope you enjoy my first mod. I guess you couldn't call it my module. How about my idea! that works.
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RPGSL
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« Reply #3 on: August 09, 2005, 06:51:38 AM »

Line 1

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?php

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<?php

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zachattack
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« Reply #4 on: August 09, 2005, 06:53:59 AM »

Ok do you notice any other errors?
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RPGSL
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« Reply #5 on: August 09, 2005, 07:44:19 AM »

Line 63

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$apple = httpget('brain');

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   $brain = httpget('brain');


Line 84

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output("`2 You look around and only see Brains. You try not to gag. You think I'll try atleast one.");

should be

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output("`2 You look around and only see Brains. You try not to gag. You think ypu'll try at least one.");


Line 85

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output(" You look and see one bubbling you try not to make a digusted face.\"`6Ah, so you WOULD like a brain...`2\" he says ominously, \"`6The question is, what KIND of Brain would you like?...`2\"`n`n");

should be

            
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output(" You look and see one bubbling you try not to make a digusted face.\"`6 Ah, so you WOULD like a brain...`2\" he says ominously, \"`6The question is, what KIND of Brain would you like?`2\"`n`n");


Line 87

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output(" One carrying `4Red `2apples, one with `@Green.");

should be

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output(" One carrying `4Red `2abrains, one with `@Green.");


Line 89

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output(" `2One with `%Pink `^yellow and the other with `1red`2.");

should be

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output(" `2One with `%Pink `2and the other with `^Yellow`2.");


Line 91

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output("\"`6Which would you like warropr, the each cost `^%s `6gold...?`2\"`n`n",$c);

should be

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output("\"`6Which would you like warrior, they each cost `^%s `6gold...?`2\"`n`n",$c);


Line 92

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output("`2\"`6Or would you rather to hear a little bit about me?`2\"");

should be

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output("`2\"`6Or would you rather hear a little bit about me?`2\"");


Line 94

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addnav("Green Brain","runmodule.php?module=brainshop&op=abrain&brain=green");

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addnav("Green Brain","runmodule.php?module=brainshop&op=brain&brain=green");


Line 96

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addnav("yellow Brain","runmodule.php?module=brainshop&op=brain&brain=blue");

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addnav("Yellow Brain","runmodule.php?module=brainshop&op=brain&brain=yellow");


Line 97

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addnav("Pink Brain","runmodule.php?module=brainshop&op=brain&brain=brown");

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addnav("Pink Brain","runmodule.php?module=brainshop&op=brain&brain=pink");


Line 137

                  
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output(" draws his knife and presses it to your throat.");

should be

                  
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output(" Zust draws his knife and presses it to your throat.");


Line 150

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output(" You feel in all of it's power. `n`n");

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output(" You feel in awe of it's power. `n`n");


Line 160

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output("`2You gasp as the sight of Black Apples and reach for one.");

should be

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output("`2You gasp as the sight of Black Brains and reach for one.");


Line 162

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output("\"`6So, you choose the apple that is the color of your heart...`2\" You snicker a bit.`n");

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output("\"`6So, you choose the brain that is the color of your heart...`2\" You snicker a bit.`n");


Line 178

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if ($et < $ea && $Brain != "") addnav("Return to Menu","runmodule.php?module=brainshop&op=Brain");

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if ($et < $ea && $brain != "") addnav("Return to Menu","runmodule.php?module=brainshop&op=brain");


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output(" This family, was the Divine Bloodline from Sir Mixes, the brainsurgen.");

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output(" This family, was the Divine Bloodline from Sir Mixes, the brain surgeon.");


Line 189

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output(" But, as the family kept multiplying, each new generation was given less and less smarter...\"`n`n");

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output(" But, as the family kept multiplying, each new generation was given less and less intelligence...\"`n`n");


Line 190

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output("`2Zust wipes his brow and continues \"`6By the time that I was born, I should've been given almost no knowlegde.");

should be

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output("`2Zust wipes his brow and continues. \"`6By the time that I was born, I should've been given almost no knowledge.");


Line 193

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output(" Only problem, was that my father abused my knowledge.");

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output(" The only problem was that my father abused my knowledge.");


Line 258

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output(" You start having flash backs to a simple time of warriors.`n`n");

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output(" You start having flashbacks to a simpler time of warriors.`n`n");


Line 259

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output("`^Witnessing these flashback, you gain `#%s `^Experience!",$expgain);

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output("`^Witnessing these flashbacks, you gain `#%s `^Experience!",$expgain);



I would suggest going through the entire module again to see if I missed any. I think I spotted the majority of them, though. You may want to proofread a bit more before posting the modules.  Wink
« Last Edit: August 10, 2005, 05:19:35 AM by RPGSL » Logged
fisk
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« Reply #6 on: August 11, 2005, 08:41:01 PM »

You should at least credit me for taking my idea  Shocked
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« Reply #7 on: August 11, 2005, 08:43:26 PM »

http://dragonprime.net/index.php?board=24;action=display;threadid=2042;start=msg23451#msg23451
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zachattack
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« Reply #8 on: August 19, 2005, 08:59:05 PM »

Yeah but you can share your ideas and we can turn your ideas into mods.
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